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Photo caption checklist

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Published: Wednesday, September 12, 2001

Photo captions (cutlines) require information, taste, judgment and imagination.

The best cutlines do more than explain a photo. They pull readers into the story. Apply the same standards of accuracy to cutlines as you apply to stories and headlines. Avoid simply repeating the headline. Never write a cutline without first seeing the photo, and always be aware of the crop.

Photo cutlines accomplish four important things:

1. Explain the action.
2. Name the principals.
3. Tell why we’re running the photo.
4. Note the important or telling details in the photo.

In writing or editing cutlines, you should answer yes to these questions:

  • Have you used the present tense? (Use the past tense when adding background, not describing action.
  • Have you used the active voice? (Passive-voice writing is weak writing.)
  • Does the cutline identify, fully and clearly? (Never leave out someone who figures prominently in the photo.)
  • Does it tell when?
  • Does it tell where?
  • Does the cutline contain all the important information? (For example, does it give the score of the game, the status of the patient? A caption should be able to stand alone.)
  • Are names spelled correctly?
  • Is it easy to read?
  • Have you eliminated cliches?
  • Have you weeded out needless adjectives and adverbs?
  • Have you explained all mysterious objects or circumstances?
  • Have you gone beyond the obvious? (It is the job of the cutline to supply information that is not obvious from the image.)

    (Example) Poor: A smiling Gorbachev waves to the crowd. Better: Gorbachev greets party-goers in Red Square. The festive atmosphere demonstrated a new mood inside the Kremlin.)

     

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